Sunday, November 29, 2015
Narritive Writing
"Ah" I sigh as I sit down and start to relax. Just then my daughter runs in and says"PHOTO TIME!" She rushes to set up her camera. " Do i H-A-V-V-E to!" I asked as if I'm juvenile "YES!" she squeals with excitement. """Click""" My photo was taken. I stare at my very scruffy iron coloured hair. My pale pursed lips make me jump. My fragile face makes me look sadder than a mouse without cheese! The phone rings I whisper "Dam' I wobble and struggle to stand up my thing legs look as though they're going to break. I hobble over to the phone and pick it up "Hello??" I answer.
Monday, November 16, 2015
losing Nemo
Lately I have been reading a book called Losing Nemo it was about a little boy called Pete and his pet fish Nemo. Pete loved nemo but one day nemo sadly passed away Pete's aunt aunt Vera said that she would trick Pete but that was wrong and instead when Pete found out he did a burial and buried nemo he still has his bowl and he still precisely at 7:15 am puts five fish flakes on nemos grave.
Sophisticated Picture book unit- Anne Frank
Sophisticated picture book unit- Anne Frank
Book Review
Anne Frank is written by Josephine Poole and illustrated by Angela Barrett.
Here is a little taster of the book:
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The story of Anne Frank begins with an ordinary little girl, someone you might sit next to in class.
She had large, expressive eyes and dark, curly hair. She was lively and popular always surrounded by her friends. Mostly Anne felt on top of the world. But sometimes she was afraid. There was a good reason for this: Adolf Hitler ruled germany them, and he had vowed to get rid of the jews Anne Frank was a German Jew..
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I see...
On the front I can see Anne Frank and her friends looking glum and dark. They also have a big star on the front of their jackets saying "JOOD"
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I think...
I think the author wanted us to feel that we need to be aware that this could happen to use and to accept who we are.
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I Connect...
This connects to the attacks in Syria its like a BIG disagreement and they want to get rid of certain people but they just end up in war.
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Anne frank is REALLY famous and her diary is AMAZING you should think about reading this. Look in the school library for it In Non-Fiction History just by the I.C.T or the entrance to the library.
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Here is a little taster of the book:
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The story of Anne Frank begins with an ordinary little girl, someone you might sit next to in class.
She had large, expressive eyes and dark, curly hair. She was lively and popular always surrounded by her friends. Mostly Anne felt on top of the world. But sometimes she was afraid. There was a good reason for this: Adolf Hitler ruled germany them, and he had vowed to get rid of the jews Anne Frank was a German Jew..
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I see...
On the front I can see Anne Frank and her friends looking glum and dark. They also have a big star on the front of their jackets saying "JOOD"
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I think...
I think the author wanted us to feel that we need to be aware that this could happen to use and to accept who we are.
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I Connect...
This connects to the attacks in Syria its like a BIG disagreement and they want to get rid of certain people but they just end up in war.
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Anne frank is REALLY famous and her diary is AMAZING you should think about reading this. Look in the school library for it In Non-Fiction History just by the I.C.T or the entrance to the library.
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Monday, November 2, 2015
Visual Writing
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| My hideout (Google image) |
I look in the mirror and see my beautiful waves of ginger hair. My bright blue eyes are sparkling. All over my face i see lots of polka dot freckles and a shining grinning smile, I can smell the fragrance of my perfume.
Some times walking into my room makes me feel claustrophobic, So i lay down on my bed and close my eyes. Once i close my eyes my imagantion runs wild, but the one thing that relaxes me is my peaceful hide out. The soft and green grass surrounds me as the fragrance from the blossom trees run up through my nostriles. The sparkling pink, red an yellow horizons day is over, it quietly sneaks down which means it is my time to go.
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